by Emily Bertholf
Poetic ramblings or nonsense, you decide.
Mmmm. I can smell the coffee. *
The phrasing is very WCW. I like it. Nicely done.
"philosophies split of coffee-stained mirrors."
Good closing.
Thanks for the comments Jake and Sam. Sam, thank you for noticing WCW - definitely an inspiration for this one.
A stimulating and evocative parade of sensual images. *
Enjoyed this--it put me right there.
YES! accompanies seraglio abduction with cream and sugar.
By my green candle, I'll even try it again!
YES! accompanies a seraglio abduction with cream and sugar.
(to name properly the coincidental circumstance of reading the first time)
Thank you, Emily!
I've always loved poems presented as lists. The juxtaposition of many sensory details can be quite impactful when done correctly. Great work!
Mmmm. I can smell the coffee. *
The phrasing is very WCW. I like it. Nicely done.
"philosophies
split
of
coffee-stained
mirrors."
Good closing.
Thanks for the comments Jake and Sam. Sam, thank you for noticing WCW - definitely an inspiration for this one.
A stimulating and evocative parade of sensual images. *
Enjoyed this--it put me right there.
YES! accompanies
seraglio abduction
with cream and sugar.
By my green candle, I'll even try it again!
YES! accompanies
a seraglio abduction
with cream and sugar.
(to name properly the coincidental circumstance of reading the first time)
Thank you, Emily!
I've always loved poems presented as lists. The juxtaposition of many sensory details can be quite impactful when done correctly. Great work!