Coffee Shop
Warm
smells
the
orange
tastes
welcome
Mozart
windows
dishes
books
only
and
clatter
philosophies
split
of
coffee-stained
mirrors.
smells
the
orange
tastes
welcome
Mozart
windows
dishes
books
only
and
clatter
philosophies
split
of
coffee-stained
mirrors.
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Author's Note
Poetic ramblings or nonsense, you decide.
Other stories by Emily Bertholf
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Mmmm. I can smell the coffee. *
The phrasing is very WCW. I like it. Nicely done.
"philosophies
split
of
coffee-stained
mirrors."
Good closing.
Thanks for the comments Jake and Sam. Sam, thank you for noticing WCW - definitely an inspiration for this one.
A stimulating and evocative parade of sensual images. *
Enjoyed this--it put me right there.
YES! accompanies
seraglio abduction
with cream and sugar.
By my green candle, I'll even try it again!
YES! accompanies
a seraglio abduction
with cream and sugar.
(to name properly the coincidental circumstance of reading the first time)
Thank you, Emily!
I've always loved poems presented as lists. The juxtaposition of many sensory details can be quite impactful when done correctly. Great work!