by Ed Higgins
A Praying Mantis
clover to bright emerald green
landed on my sleeve
and lingered as I worked
in my hay field.
While I'm not much of
a praying person,
my concern for a friend
suffering from cancer
led me to ask the mantis
to consider praying for her.
The creature
visibly
pulled its legs
into praying
position
(which I realize
actually indicates
readiness for prey
although my sleeve
held nothing but this creature
and my bemused delight).
So I asked the mantis
on behalf of my non-believer self,
projecting my real hope for
my friend
beating off the cancer
preying on her.
The mantis visit ended
abruptly thereafter. The creature
springing back into the field's stubble,
disappearing into the clover and grass.
In all my farming years,
never has a Praying Mantis
visited me in this manner.
While our theologies
may not have converged,
I felt grateful at
this strange alignment
of my request
and the mantis'
prayer-folding response.
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As 1st few lines explain: a praying mantis jumped on my sleeve while working in my hayfield. Published: Radix Magazine, Matthew Steem, Editor, vol. 45, #4, Winter, 2024
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Beautiful poem! Yes, interesting "alignment".
The pray/prey works beautifully.