Want
by Deborah Oster Pannell
I want you close
I want to feel you
inside me,
softening me until
my borders are blurred
and I'm hardly breathing,
my heart swelling
so big it
brings me to my knees,
I want to know the
pain of losing you
each time you
close your eyes and
go to sleep and
dream of someone else,
I want to laugh deeply
at some joke you told me
just when I thought
you were going to kiss me,
I want to know why
I want you so badly,
and I want you to
want me so badly,
and I just want to want…
I don't want to say goodbye,
I want your arms around
me, holding me tight, just when
I'm kicking and screaming the most…
A lot of feeling here. Thought-provoking.
Well done.
Thank you, Harley. These are very old kinds of feelings, just channeled through a new kind of mind... or maybe more accurately, young feelings channeled through an older mind? :)
I enjoyed the poem, Deborah. Good piece.
great work, very sharp, very focused
Thanks Sam, thanks Lil... I appreciate both of your comments very much.