by David James
The first night I met her we slow danced to George Strait songs for most of the evening and when we took a break, our talking went warm and well as we sat eating hot dogs and sipping beers until she dropped a couple of bombs, first, telling me she was married and then, that she did my wife's hair at Cuts 'n' Curls, so even though I was taken by the bump of her thighs against mine as we danced, absolutely hypnotized by the look of restlessness in her hungry eyes, I wasn't sure of a next step until she smiled and said, “I'll meet you out in the parking lot.”
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goes in the book...
For shame...
One small step for mankind, one giant leap for a man. *
Wicked and sad. Great title. *
These one sentence pieces are leaving more and more of a profound ache.*
Nice. *
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"The first night I met her..." says it all. More nights. *
Builds to a climax.
"our talking went warm and well "
Love this phrasing.