whispered boat

Great form, David. The piece carries an archetypal feel-- weaving, boat of words, whispered, crossing dark.

I like this poem.

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Thanks Sam, glad you liked it.

Thanks Jenny.

You sing in your chains like the sea.
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the perennial unbearable lightness of being...

Thanks good people, Bill and Amantine.

Beautiful.

Thanks Dianne.

Beautiful journey. *

Thanks Beate, one who knows, having led us on more than a few yourself.

Enjoyed.

Thanks Gary.