just because the maker of the tracks and the tracks themselves are invisible doesn't mean there's nothing there

Mortal and eternal. Or, eternal and mortal. I like that. I admire the title too, the importance of it. *

A lot happening between the exhale and the gasp.

I like this for its minimalist impact although I'm not sure about the juxtaposition with the extremely long title

Hi Dianne and Mathew,

Thanks for the comments. Astute comments I might say, with appreciation.

Hi Eamon,

Unsure is the word entire for my poetry, the home of doubt and metaphysical waffling. Always glad to have you weigh in.

David