Here's the thing. I never thought you'd
Be swept away from me for always at a time. Some
Grain of you still seems to catch
In my eyes from time to time.
What I'm trying to say is I'm
Sorry that we are no bigger than our
flesh. I'd give anything to be in
Your presence without history or seasons having
Been hammered like nails into your heart. I understand
That oceans will continue to live and
Die in our veins, but also clouds
Will rise out of our many done deeds to
Drench us sooner or later. I want
You to let go of me completely
Now and know that you are forever loved.
Took My Blind Spot Out
For the riding and
Oh she did jump the
Overgrown hedges
So beautifully
Such that the little
Purple flowers thrilled
Themselves several
Shades deeper in the
Quickness of her flight.
delightfully arch, doublevoiced poetic conversation
i can't stand complainers either. love that giant lily pad. your similes constitute a magical jungle where a boy and a girl can get lost in easily forgetting all about time and duties.
Absolutely loved the blind spot bonus. Loved it.
Enjoyed this piece.
Really nice stuff, Darryl. There's some exciting imagery here.
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one each for each of these wonderful poems.
Speechless. *
And that's my reaction to all three.
Thanks Gary, Marcus,James, Sam,Susan, Bill,and Meg. I'm so glad this resonated with you.