A girl. An elderly woman. A bear.
A girl sitting under a raining showerhead, curled into a ball. An elderly woman swallowing her daily vitamins. A bear practicing soccer with a giant pinecone.
A girl naked and wet in the mirror. An elderly woman gurgling water mixed with salt. A bear scoring another goal, the imaginary crowd going nuts.
A girl cutting pictures of her lover into glitter. An elderly woman wondering what it would be like to run a marathon. A bear cannonballing into the river.
A girl placing an ad online. An elderly woman jogging uphill and quitting halfway. A bear shooting out the sky, forepaws in the shape of pistols.
A girl typing in the asking price. An elderly woman bent over and clutching at her chest and saying, Is that it, God? A bear crossing the highway and causing a deadly pileup.
A girl confessing to her older sister what she did. An elderly woman taking it one step at a time. A bear climbing up a telephone pole for a better view.
A girl carefully removing her heart with a car jack, a pair of scissors and tongs. The same girl wiping her blood off the floor with layers of paper towels. The girl again, on her knees, feeling woozy, feeling good, craving honey drops on her tongue.
A bear in the playground. Coming down the slide. Monkey bars, next.
A girl checking her voicemail every two minutes. An elderly woman dialing the phone number listed on the ad. A bear chasing after a plastic bag tumbling down the alley.
A girl waiting at the door, heart in a Ziploc. An elderly woman stopping at the bank. A bear in a screaming contest with a troop of girl scouts.
A girl five hundred dollars richer, rocking out to (What's The Story?) Morning Glory. An elderly woman on the way to the hospital with a bloody heart in her purse. A bear chewing on cans of tuna in the market.
A girl bumping into someone at the coffee shop. An elderly woman missing her connecting bus and deciding to walk the rest of the way. A bear tackling garbage bins left on the street.
A girl drinking Cranberry Chai Concoction. Joking with the boy she bumped into. Forgetting she has no heart.
A girl fingering the stitches beneath her shirt. An elderly woman peeking at the heart in her purse as she takes a shortcut through the park, then peeking once more. A bear making waves in the park fountain.
A girl not ready to give up on love just yet. An elderly woman oblivious to the bear scampering towards her. A bear playing make believe tetherball with the body of an elderly woman.
A girl hollow on the inside. The mauled carcass of an elderly woman discovered by a jogger. A bear tossing a human heart to itself, skipping through the woods.
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I wanted to write a story about a wild, mischievous bear wreaking havoc in people's lives. I combined that idea with another idea i had about a girl who removes her heart and sells it online. This story was the result.
Originally published in Pear Noir!
"A bear scoring another goal, the imaginary crowd going nuts."
Ha, I was waiting for "going wild."
To the elderly woman - running a marathon sucks, at least running the first 11 miles of one does
Love love love how you set the pattern up and get me used to it and then blow it up with the tremendous all "girl" section
The girl checking her voice mail every two minutes sounds like a more relaxed version of me with e-mail
I was just thinking if there was a way to Love a bear than I certainly do...until reading the last section (sort of like that guy in Grizzly, maybe?)
Outstanding stuff as usual, Charles. What immense talent you have.
Excellent piece. The form is great.
So creative, completely original. And the form just sells it all perfectly. Very cool.
Charles, I didnt know where this was going but figured it would turn out ironic. And there is some very deep ideas and thoughts in this seemingly fun piece. Good job.I would maybe repeat the first line at least another two or three times in the piece, to give it a bit of poetry. Just a thought!
Wow, thanks everyone. Glad you enjoyed this.
A wild and crazy story. I was rooting for the bear all the way!
This is a very intriguing form and could get tedious but in your hands, it rolled on beautifully. Very nice.
What a story, and what a fun bear. Enjoyed this, much.