by Carl Santoro
It probably would
never happen
for someone else
as it happened
for me, just then.
The car I was in
was speeding
at about seventy.
The night had
already begun.
The view from
the windows
revealed mostly
open fields.
Small cold-like clouds
slept stubbornly
only yards
above the earth.
The black from the
night part of night
was not black yet,
but a mellowing
deep, far off blue.
And then I, and I believe,
I alone, saw
this small child
run a few steps
in a field, and
stop to throw a
lighted sparkler
into the blackening
blueness of the sky.
It glowered happily,
and yet desperately;
and yet desperately,
for it would
never return
to the earth
as the same
bright stick of
joyousness
as it is now.
The last gleeful
sparkledrops
painted the child's
attentive face
with a friendly, but
departing,
orange goodbye.
The image of the streak
from the child's
run and throw
now was taken in
by the nearest mother cloud.
I remember it now-
still as if those seconds
are still occurring
as a full length movie.
The child smiling up,
along with the sparkler;
the fading contrail
evolving from white
to a soft blue and
slowly melting into
the air.
And then I could
see no more.
A one act performance.
So fast.
So very, very long.
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When I was in the Air Force, stationed at Pope AFB in North Carolina, I hitch-hiked up to Long Island every weekend for 1 1/2yrs. Along Route 95 I would never know what I would encounter, between the people who picked me up and the sights we all would see.
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another nice capture
Good narrative here.
Matt, I appreciate your comments more than realizing that a newly-opened avocado actually is perfectly ripe and not a waste of $1.29. You rock! I highly value any and all input from you! Right now I'm struggling with my story on Fictionaut titled,BLOCKED. In Chapter One I tried to establish a good opening using a unique situation, complication,crisis and, now in Chapter Two looking to create hope or fear to add suspense. Your thoughts?
Sam, Thank you for your comment. I am still spellbound by your, A Certainty and Not the Poem I Meant to Write. Your imagery in it unlocks experiences from the fog of aging and makes the world wonderful again. Thanks!
Like so much good food the magic comes first and the taste something you think about for so long. Like a old girlfriend. Maybe.