by Bill Yarrow
I was like a bullet shot from a university tower
toward three children crawling on a blanket
in a faraway park. I bounced around a bit and
landed in my life. We were all bullets shot from
the same gun, but you landed in Natchez and I
landed in D.C. and fragments of the rest of us can
be found anywhere there's an Adirondack chair.
Yes, we are bullets, but we've all been hit by something
resembling a trajectory. You most famously of all.
“Only a flesh wound, only a flesh wound!” you cry,
but what other kinds are there? None. No other kinds.
Each morning, I cradle my striated pain, but it's not an
external impairment. Foully accompanied by a cordite
stench, it emanates from the calibrated part of me.
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This poem appears in WRENCH (erbacce-press, 2009)
The poem appears in Pointed Sentences (BlazeVOX, 2012).
Nice form here, Bill. An interesting use of the lines. The enjambments are effective.
There is so much going on here in this poem: an individual view and pain, a world view - "Yes, we are bullets, but we've all been hit by something
resembling a trajectory.", and a relationship between narrator and "You most famously of all."
I really love the image that we are all bullets (able to do damage), and all hit by something else.
If you haven't already, listen to Harry Chapin's "Sniper" about Charles Whitman. Chilling.
Another good poem from you.