by Bill Yarrow
like a flame that sinks down among the late decaying embers
like a floating sea-bird on the long heaves and swells of sound
like the phantasmagoric play of the northern lights
like an uprooted weed that lies wilting in the sun
like a black shadow emerging into sunshine
like ether out of a phial
like a tuft of green moss on a crumbling wall
like a rough blow upon an ulcerated wound
like the stroke of sudden death
like the dome of an immense lamp
like blades of grass at the sweep of the scythe
like a line of cliffs against a tempestuous tide
like a shapeless piece of driftwood tossed ashore
with the initials of a name upon it
like the voice of a young child that was spending its infancy
without playfulness
like a ghost that revisits the familiar fireside and can no longer
make itself seen or felt
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Similes all taken from "The Scarlet Letter" by Nathaniel Hawthorne.
This poem appeared in Olentangy Review. Thank you, Darryl; and Melissa Price.
This poem appears in "Against Prompts."
https://www.amazon.com/Against-Prompts-Bill-Yarrow/dp/1943170282
"like truth
like a dream
like human language"
Amazing stuff.
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Like the boiling, roiling down to the essence. Like.
Lovely arrangement
Hawthorne was definitely a master of similes.
'Spoiler': I know zip about poetry.
But I guess you could tell this a form of "found" poetry? I haven't revisited the Scarlet Letter for a loooooong time. Don't know if these are verbatim quotes or if they're paraphrased. But I do like how you've arranged them. I love the closing three stanzas. Progressively shortening them has ramped up their effectiveness, it seems to me. *
That should be, "But I guess you could call this a form of 'found' poetry.
"like the first encounter in the world beyond the grave of two spirits who had been intimately connected in their former life but now stood coldly shuddering in mutual dread as not yet familiar with their state nor wonted to the companionship of disembodied beings"
A rich piece, Bill. The form unfolding, opening to "language" at the end is powerful. Nicely done. *
Thanks, Jill, Matt, Gary, SDR, Ray, and Sam.
Ray, yes, a "found" poem but more precisely what today is termed a "cento." All quotes verbatim.
Such skill you have, Bill! Centos are not easy to construct and are often, I think, mangled. This is quite extraordinary. *
Thank you, Charlotte!
Really fine, Bill.
Thanks, Kitty!
Amazing then and now. Terrific work.
Thank you, Darryl!