Tastes like Wind

Breezy. *

I read this several times, it's certainly a poem to ponder.

I love the way it is formatted. Broken conversations opens clarity:I know you are crying but I don't want to face what that means.

Brilliant, Arexa, more poems please. Definite fav!

Thank you both for your comments. I'm glad to hear them.

Lovely. *

I like this very much :)

Thank you both.

It has a beautiful twinkle to it.

Thank you, Darryl.

Very haiku-like through the first half or so then leaves the page as story. That's a great twist, and easily done. I think the use of broken lines and word spacing is effective here. The poem achieves much in a small space. I like it.

Beautiful.