77 Words About Nothing
2.21.2012 [1]
I always thought we belonged in some gutter -
Together.
Trading punches and clinking bottles.
Shooters, mostly.
Tiny vessels of strawberry wine. Or maybe something peach flavored.
Something breezy to kill the sting of the harder stuff.
Remember that time the bus driver didn't let me on?
Said the Greyhound was no place for drunkards.
That was Memphis.
She hated my face, my stale smile.
She said it made her miserable.
More miserable than the smell of the river.
77 Words About Nothing
2.21.2012 [2]
We met up with Slow Slim while he was taking the trash down to the curb.
His hair was messed and blood was gushing from the web between his thumb and index finger.
He paused a little to look at us while globs pattered and melted the fresh snow behind his bare feet.
We never talked to Slim.
We'd just walk by to catch glimpses and see if he'd smile.
Give us a toothless grin -
Or maybe wink.
77 Words About Nothing
2.20.2012
When you've spent as much time as I have cleaning up spilled coffee and steak sauce, it's the little things that you really begin to appreciate.
Stuffing shells, smelling empty bourbon bottles, buying books,
and burying your blues.
It's the easy things like these that begin to define your time when you don't know what else to do with it.
Filling notebooks with jibberish because empty pages are depressing;
and people seem to like jibberish.
Don't they?
-to be published by Untoward
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I've started to find that an exercise that was supposed to A) Force me to write everyday and to B) tidy up my writing - has really got a hold of me. My brain almost stops after 77 words, now. It is so trained that it feels that all complete thoughts come in the length of ~ 77 Words.
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An Oulipo structure. Keep going with them!
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Thanks for the encouragement, Bill. Without an intervention, I have no other option but to keep going with them :)
Tony, you already know how I love these. And I'll be in touch after AWP about Flash Fiction Fridays for March!
Fave.
Thanks so much, Robert! Really looking forward to hearing from you!
Anthony, love the structure (will have to look up Bill's big word) and how you worked within constraint. Sad little stories, the best kind. Peace *
Wow! I'm glad I found these before they slipped from the front page. Love the first two especially. Do you have or are you developing a series? These are strong and speak with a unique voice. I'd play with the lines a bit, but the content is excellent.*
Thanks for the kind words, Linda and JP. I have to agree that sad little stories are the best-especially when your head is full of them :) And JP, I've been writing these pretty often and I guess it's kind of a series. Most of them were supposed to be scenes or starts to longer stories but my mind and my fingers cut them down to 77 words. If you care to read anymore, all of the ones that I have written are here : http://blondeonblog.com/category/77-words-about-nothing/
Thanks again for the encouragement.
I couldn't pass by a title called '77 words about nothing' without reading it.
Great stuff and great style, capturing moments so clearly.
Thanks, David! I really appreciate the kind words!
Hello from Memphis. Really, really enjoyed these!
Thanks so much for reading, Katie! Really happy you enjoyed them!
These are fine, Anthony, and addictive. Thanks for the link. Now I'm going go read some more.
Thank you, Barry! I'm really glad you enjoyed them! Really appreciate the kind words!
excellent work.
Thanks so much, James! Glad you enjoyed them!