by Amanda Deo
I google the possibility of making a tiny grave. If I time it right I will be on hold for just a little longer. Every time I look at you there are two dumb mouths that slip between stretch marks. There is a gap between leaving me in a hotel parking lot & I care about you & photo-stalking is an apology.
Two feet deep is good enough. Abides by all health and safety codes. I'm going to need you to hold my hand.
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Everyone in my peer group is having babies, including ex boyfriends and first loves.
Good, good piece. Strong opening line. I like. *
nice work, so much said in so little space.***
Thanks guys! You are always too nice to me.
I got the shivers from this. I hope that was the right effect!
haah Yes. Definetely shock and awe...probably more shock than awe.