Sloth
by Adam Sifre
I will take my satisfaction later,
after you are restored.
For now I am done with moving,
and I will rest my mouth here,
and here
and here.
Don't move.
Don't disturb my lazy adventure,
I beg you.
Let me rest my weary hands here,
and here
and here.
You are charged, electric.
You are tension and need,
but I am molasses, floating in amber.
So let me rest my weary body here;
always here.
I felt this all the way. Skillful stuff.
Thank you Sheldon
This really worked for me. The lines have a very pleasant and oddly restorative weight. Great title, too!
<3 *
Lxx
Thanks Letita
Sexy without being graphic. Nice easy rhythm too. *
i v like sexy sloth *
Thank you Penny and Tina. Four sins down. three to go.
Sloth is such a great word. I like your version very much. *
Thank you Charlotte. When it comes to sin, I've done my research.
this ruined me, in such a good way.
I do enjoy leaving a little ruin every now and then. Thank you Meg.
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Thanks David. I think.
Now I want to read Gluttony...
That's around somewhere
Amber seals it. Each word creates it. Amber is resin, preserved of pine, ... that inky tar. This is a GREAT poem, the BEST poem I've read about two people having different sex together. *