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    Jules Archer
    Nov 17, 02:49am

    Hi - wanted to share a piece published this week at Monkeybicycle.

    Thanks!

    http://www.monkeybicycle.net/archive/Archer/walk.html

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    Matt Dennison
    Nov 17, 03:44am

    "Weightless, her stomach kicking with a delicate lurch was her favorite part."

    That was *my* favorite part.

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    Sam Rasnake
    Nov 17, 04:09am

    Nice work, Jules. Great writing. Congratulations.

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    Bill Yarrow
    Nov 17, 04:42am

    Enjoyed. Congrats.

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    Susan Tepper
    Nov 17, 04:03pm

    Jules this is a little gem of a story. I felt it up there with her, the board, all of it. Loved her pulling her hair into a knot right before the dive.
    Big Congrats!!!

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    Robert Vaughan
    Nov 17, 07:47pm

    Really lovely writing Jules, and thanks for the heads-up here!

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    Kathy Fish
    Nov 18, 02:38am

    Wow, I love that. Held my breath reading, you really put me right there on that diving board with her. Great writing, Jules.

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    stephen hastings-king
    Nov 18, 03:20am

    i like this piece. thanks for posting the link and congrats on finding a home for some of your lovely work.

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    Jules Archer
    Nov 18, 04:10am

    Thanks so much everyone. I appreciate your support and feedback. Very much. This is why Fictionaut is great.

    --Jules

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    Marcus Speh
    Nov 18, 11:06am

    wonderful story, jules. "She could've been a ballerina." is heartbreaking - congratulations.

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    Matthew A. Hamilton
    Nov 18, 01:15pm

    Nice! Congratulations!

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    Gloria Mindock
    Nov 19, 04:28pm

    Jules-

    Congratulations!!!

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