Weekends. You may mean danger "of", as in measuring quanities as opposed to "for", as in for the purpose. I'd also be inclined to delete "that" in the first line to make it smoother.
Idling. I'd love to see one more line in this section. You can decide what it should be.
Enjoyed. Brevity is the soul of wit.
Weekends. You may mean danger "of", as in measuring quanities as opposed to "for", as in for the purpose. I'd also be inclined to delete "that" in the first line to make it smoother.
Idling. I'd love to see one more line in this section. You can decide what it should be.
Enjoyed. Brevity is the soul of wit.
Thank you for your kind words, Sam!
I love Nick Hornby too. Have you read "How to Be Good"? Welcome to Fictionaut.
Ha, Laura is so nice. And, ha, re your note on my wall. After reading your stuff I'm more resolute that a friend of Laura's is a friend of ours.
Good to have you aboard!
you should read Dave's stories too, but I don't have to tell you where to find 'em--they find you. Dude's massive.
Welcome, a friend of Laura's is a friend of ours.
oh and another thing--run, do not walk, to Matt Bell's stories linked here.
well, I have to admit to luring you here to try to give you incentive/inspiration to try in a shorter forms.
Welcome, SamX!