Breaking Bread at Al Qalzam
by Tawnysha Greene
My first time alone
with the women in Saudi Arabia,
abayas, head covers off and I see
their faces, their hair free. Hands touch
me, lead me down
a line of greetings, kisses, whispers
in Arabic that I try
to return, trilled rs, long ms,
they laugh, because my words are
Egyptian, not Saudi, not
ours, they say. I watch, follow
what they do, sit on the ground, drink gawa
from tiny gold cups, nibble whole fried fish
with my right hand. We break bread, strangers,
now friends, uncovered, naked
in a way, because they speak to me of love.
They motion with their hands, point
to themselves, each other, then
at me, pause to see
if I understand, stop between streams
of Arabic to say daughter, sister, lover.
Very nice and, I suppose, somewhere in time of other things we’be been seeing. The journey we’re seeing is compelling. Your writing is fluid and clear and beautiful when you want it to be.
Ahead of other things
"a line of greetings, kisses, whispers" Quite nice phrasing, Tawnysha.