By the time he says “I am tired of the smell of pig shit and death” you've already lost interest in him, bourbon and pathos, in the Christmas lights that hang overhead, in the background of pool tables and flaccid country music, and don't know why you say “I want a bubble bath.”
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like the way this one rolls off the tongue. well-done *
I really like this, all the small details add up to much more than their parts. And I ended up feeling that I know exactly why 'you' says what 'you says!