The exoskeleton lay on the floor, a hollow transparent self looking back at him.
Shedding came as a vague itching that formed itself into a restlessness that gathered a momentum that scattered every thought but squirming and pulling at his skin. After a period of both, he wriggled free.
The collapsed balloon is already turning a strange mottled yellow.
Shedding had seemed quite outside system specifications.
He runs his hand over his skin, which is unusually sensitive like newly exposed after a time with a beard.
Maybe this happens to everyone. Maybe everyone reacts to anomalous situations by being ashamed. Maybe everyone is waiting for someone to say it's OK.
On the amorphous yellowing form, mottles are expanding into puddles.
As he recognizes himself in it less, his interest slips away.
The shell sloughs into a pool of itself.
Watching himself dissolve comes with no sense of meaning. It is simply what it is. He finds that curious.
He turns to leave.
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nice piece, i like the way this unfolds and where it leaves the reader.
thanks for the read, comment & fave meg. i made this one by arranging and rearranging the elements on the page---it surprises me a little, where it landed. it seems to be about transformation as continuous, necessary, organic even, not terribly interesting in itself. but they're not all equivalent for that.
Seems like a burgeoning F&SF story. Grabs you right away. I think they pay more than F'naut too...