Event Particle
She says her name is Venetia. Like the blinds. She is a manifold of temporal flows. Her figures include dotted white lines that connect your hand to between her legs. You follow them into daydreams while she composes herself from sentences. She is young. She says stupid things.
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after reading susan tepper's "gutter" this morning i decided to try out the 55 word form.
i tried to add another 7 but the piece wouldn't let me.
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Why has nobody read this? I love it. I love the title, which is perfect even if one doesn't know their physics. Great work.
thanks very much for the read and comment kathy.
i understand this is coming out in blip.
i'll put up details when i have them.
yay!
Blip - congrats! Saw this on FB, loved it then, love it now. *
This is terrific-- so happy to have inspired you! Keep doing these, you have the knack!
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thanks for the reads and comments and lovely stars.
susan: thanks in particular for the encouragement. we'll see if it's true there's a knack and not just beginner's luck.