In the center of the big diorama, the real world hangs in the air by a hook. Inside it is a smaller one: stuffed doll people in plaid winter clothes struggle against inertia which takes the form of an implied wind while all around smoke trails of yarn tip from chimneys, droop over the sides and roll to the ground where they collect in growing piles between the compositions made from the collections of tiny heated spaces in which the stuffed doll people arrange themselves at night; in the otherwise empty sky artificial birds describe arrangements of tiny white arcs over assemblages of ramshackle rectangles and trapezoids around which swooning fans made from grasses are interspersed with the stiff white pods of hibernating boats and areas of painted snow on which the stuffed doll people practice for later, arriving in toy cars that move atop sticks along the slots that run down the middle of the streets which from overhead look like trolley tracks. You can see it through the window.
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love the rush, here. the details like smoke trails of yarn - most of all, the stuffed doll people! (with great reps throughout) -- punctuated by a perfect last line.
The first sentence is great. The last one even better.
this was a delight to read aloud. *
thanks for the reads and lovely comments. btw the real world is the name of a house boat. it's in the back yard.
i'm pleased that the interior diorama works...i had the idea of lots of moving parts in a compressed space that you'd take in more or less all at once if you were looking at it, kind of in the way i take in what it's based on out my back window.
and i like that you read it aloud, julie. feel free to any time. i make most of these to be performed, even if in my imagination..