Spilled Milk on a Fresh Lawn

What if it was all cut and calculated.

And the air

circulated perfectly

around

and

around

the room.

And the roses

were

without thorns.

And no devil stalked flocks.

And no man meant harm.

And the clocks

rocking

in their hammocks

silent

and

still

infinitely

swooned.

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Not sure if this has anything to do with spilling milk on a fresh lawn.

But I like that idea.

Kathy Fish, Jan 17, 2015

I like this a lot. I like the sentiment and Dali-esque imagery:

And the clocks
rocking
in their hammocks
silent
and
still

infinitely
swooned.

Jane Hammons, Jan 17, 2015

great movement toward that closing swoon *

Gary V. Powell, Jan 18, 2015

And no devil stalked flocks.
And no man meant harm.*

Emily Bertholf, Jan 19, 2015

Great title. Provocative, dreamlike, zenlike.*

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