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She wakes up sad. She can't shit. She spreads out the foil. no creases. folds it in half. She puts the stuff in the crease. holds a lighter under it. A zippo. then smokes it. Well smokes the smoke. It's like kissing god or the kiss of the spider woman or the kiss of death. whatever. a kiss. The end.
Whew! That's what I say!
Nice! Love the line, "It's like kissing god or the kiss of the spider woman or the kiss of death."
And after the line that Christian quoted:
"whatever. a kiss."
It all fits together so well.
Very good. I like the honeybee story, too.
Are the lowercase letters intentional after the periods?