Kirk, I love the title. There is an ambiguity to this piece. I am not sure if the speaker is scared to treat a wound or if the alcohol in question won't give an immediate buzz because of too high a tolerance. Maybe there is a word you can change. Either way it has "buzz" no pun intended. :O)
Thanks for your comment, Roberto! I like the ambiguity of it, and I'm not sure yet what edits I will make, whether to adjust the flow or to clarify. Whatever I end up doing, know that I appreciate your feedback!
Kirk, I love the title. There is an ambiguity to this piece. I am not sure if the speaker is scared to treat a wound or if the alcohol in question won't give an immediate buzz because of too high a tolerance. Maybe there is a word you can change. Either way it has "buzz" no pun intended. :O)
Thanks for your comment, Roberto! I like the ambiguity of it, and I'm not sure yet what edits I will make, whether to adjust the flow or to clarify. Whatever I end up doing, know that I appreciate your feedback!