I didn't ask for help
I asked for what was best.
I asked for what was right.
I asked for stillness and to savor every night
you can ask but don't tell
feel your center swell
with pride that coincides with love,
memory motivation makes circles appear lines
Just close your eyes to see the light.
I asked for what was right.
I asked for stillness and to savor every night
you can ask but don't tell
feel your center swell
with pride that coincides with love,
memory motivation makes circles appear lines
Just close your eyes to see the light.
I like all the work that went into this. I still think you can tweak it to have it flow more. Little things like changing "to" in the last line to "and" to give it more of a destination, such as you have the power within you, it's simple, just do it, believe it, let it be, let it happen. Don't be afraid.Also it's okay to not let the scheme get in the way. I'd change line 7 to "memory motivation makes circles lines appear." But that's just me.I also like the title very much.Thanks for posting.