by Kim Chinquee
He said he needed her, and she wiped her face a little, stepping to the in-lane, closer to the tundra.
She'd told him she was quitting, tired of being laughed at. She was always last. She said the distance was too long, and she couldn't even finish without stopping, couldn't do the workouts without walking.
He wore those running shorts that rose too high, flapping up when you went faster and the wind blew. His hair made him look like Elvis. He should have been a wrestler.
He said, Do you want to be a quitter?
Everyone was gone now and she told him she felt foolish. It was just running. It wasn't hard.
You're not always last, he said. She beat someone in the last meet. He said, That was really something.
He said, "Someone has to be last."
He said, "You don't always have to win."
He said, "You really want to be a quitter?"
She figured no one really cared and it was her decision. At home, her father ran around with knives falling from his pockets, and her mother couldn't live without Chianti. At mealtimes, she sat on her hands, looking out at the gate that kept in all the cattle.
The coach said, "And who cares if someone's laughing? That's a silly reason to quit."
She watched him fly away then. He went fast. He tripped on a hurdle.
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They both seem vulnerable - him in his running shorts that rise too high, her sitting on her hands. And the title...folds into the story beautifully.
A friend just finished running the marathon this weekend. His main goal in the last few miles was beating an Elvis lookalike. Like the Elvis in your story. I love the last line.
"She figured no one really cared and it was her decision. At home, her father ran around with knives falling from his pockets, and her mother couldn’t live without Chianti."
very cool.
This is so nice, Kim.
I love this graph: She figured no one really cared and it was her decision...
It makes the story so nice and round and fluffy. Okay, maybe not fluffy, but nice and round.
Thanks, Claudia, Marcy, Barry and Mary.
Marcy, which marathon was it? I think there must be some clan of Elvis runners. I've seen "Elvis" at just about every marathon I've done. Very odd. (Getting so delirious at mile 20, like you start to think it's really the same person, or something.)
Thanks for posting this.
The New York Marathon.
Beautiful.
I like this--particularly the surprise of his trip in the end.
Thanks, Corey and Katrina!
Lovely last line.
Thanks, Stephan.
Just happily stumbled upon this piece - thanks Kim. So tight and I'm left pondering the runner and her coach. Well done!