Flowing, Flown
In the field stands a jealous man with fifteen eyes stored inside the cuffs of well-worn khaki pants. His pockets pull with clinking dimes and when his hand jams in the silver-dipped copper disks clank and gather. Ten cents per, he says, and pop! he buys another eye, and slide, he lines it in the folds, for no one looks for gems on ankles, gems tucked in a rolled-up sleeve. He likes the way they pulse and blink and try to hear by straining wide. He'd like to buy up every one; he'd like to fill the air between his thumb and finger; finger, ring; ring and pinky; he'd like to walk with outstretched hands to see how things appear from there.
He spies a little side-eyed bird and tries to buy his two for one; but no, this bird won't sell: I have no use for dimes, he says. But, clink, the man jams in his hand. Two dimes for one—the bird says no. Four dimes for one—the bird says no. Ten dimes for one—the bird says no; and when he bends his wings for flight the man throws all those copper disks, but soft they slide inside the layered feathers on those wings. The man grabs in his fist the eyes that blink and strain inside those khaki folds. Swoosh, zip! But soft, they roll upon those wings; they roll off onto air and flutter there, tears welling up because of wind. The man says, Nice to know how things appear. He's jealous of their height, their lonely sense of wonder what, and where to go from here.
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This story appeared in (rip) 3rd Bed. I have no idea where it came from, really; I think I woke one day obsessed with the idea of seeing things through others' eyes and was just playing around.
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Thanks, Gary! (I'm assuming these are happy comments).
I like how this story approaches a topic in a fantastical way. Always fun with a writer does that. You've done it very well here. Not what I thought it would be when reading your author's note.