On my way home from the war, I met a woman.
Met her in San Franciso, winter of '66. Beautiful, tall, and blonde, an older fallen angel herself, maybe thirty-two, maybe Satan herself, I'd followed her up Nob Hill, quietly admiring her calves until she suddenly turned, asked if I was hungry.
I told her I was twenty-one.
She smiled, took me home, fed me Treblinka pancakes, Hiroshima sausages, My Lai berries with Wittgenstein sauce and a heavy dollop of cream. While I ate, she watched me like vultures do, fist under chin, with expectancy and humor, told me she'd been married.
"Four children... three girls and a boy."
On the fingers of her left hand she counted their names like numbers, “Poverty... Chastity... Obedience... and Saul.”
It was Saul I guessed, who sat in a corner of the kitchen humming, playing with a spinning top that turned and churned on the linoleum floor. I remember there was music coming in the window, and a woman singing tremolo ballads in the street with a voice like Buffy Sainte-Marie.
Saul? Kid looked like he was dreaming of Damascus.
When I asked her about her husband, she laughed.
When I told her I'd been to Japan, she laughed again.
With a smile, she led me to her bedroom and I remember thinking she smelled like strawberries. Last thing I remember, she's closing the door behind us and I woke up three years later in cheap hotel in Cleveland with three cracked ribs and a broken heart.
Brilliant. That last sentence is a novella in itself!
Well, this just fine.
Wow, James. Great twists in a small space--
"She smiled, took me home, fed me Treblinka pancakes, Hiroshima sausages, My Lai berries with Wittgenstein sauce and a heavy dollop of cream. While I ate, she watched me like vultures do..."
Thanks, G.E., David, Sam.
Love comes in so many different fragrances.*
"like vultures do, fist under chin," So fucking good.
hungry at 21 *
Thanks, everyone.