of new devotion.
A year will pass with little to no change.
Stockings. There I am, mending them by stitch.
Nearly so much as your smiles. Crying is
This is desired. I will know how you love me
By how you smile. Other women live always
Shock Wakes Up the Heart
My heart hurts as I miss you here.
This was your intention, I know.
And nor is my reaction unique.
You train women this way,
to love you and lose you
this gracefully. I wish I had
just one presence of fist
to partake in just one punch
to your solar plexus,
to your nose,
to your heart-- like
spiking electronic
equipment
used in ambulances.
Technician: If you feel no pain,
why should I?
Why should I
place the paddles
so gently, my love,
like a trained professional
on Salvation Road,
saying: Are we clear? No?
Clear? (Hit him again.)
No? Thought not.
Flatlines-------playing borrowed time,
to the tune of your next widow's
atonal silent weep.
No One Can
No one can convince us we are pretty
when the object of our desires does not dote.
Commend us to your next of kin, spread the
flesh feast of gorgeous on a laden viewer's table,
provide those who will follow our words like clocks,
provide the admiration of strangers, the distraction
of afternoon comparison. One who wants can give
and give and give--yet we seek that one soft word,
one telling glance, from the one who withholds
or unmans us from our strapping selfhood,
whose neglect spurs such ranges of self-hatred or love.
We live consumed by need for more. Or less.
Mutter: Yes. Please, please. Only to you
do we listen: Fail to speak to us again.
On the Necessary Absence of Cake
Let's pretend for one moment
that we don't want cake: white cake,
yellow cake, red velvet cake, cake with
carob or chips, cake in cups, cake in
to-go boxes with cream-cheese frosting
licked or saved on these hard edges of
cardboard. What we want is bread and
water, lukewarm water, stale bread,
because then we can dream of cake
without needing to possess it
with habit. And if cake is like men,
the bread will not fool us. And if manna is like
water, the love will not catch us, and if
we get used to this cakeless, mannaless
situation for long enough, we can be
free to decide cake does not exist, happy
to go it alone, gumming the barely edible
yeast, mixed hydrogen--because bread and
water are not those addictive personalities
we are--and our greed that can't be filled is the soul's
impending cavity, piercing sinus near the brain.
Tight forehead. Plaque to the heart.
I want no cake.
I want no manna, no love.
I want not to want these things long enough that
I, balling my bread in small palatable pieces,
forget full-well what they are
or that I may taste in them
some sweet difference.
This is the only way: Pass the irons.
Pass the water. Pass no sugar.
Pass, no exit. Pass my time
as a mercy, then
like the fondest baker
in this prison's kitchen,
in this world,
and for no reason,
let me wear the bland
uniform of unseen:
Let me by you,
delicately, while I sob-- love,
let me pass.
_____
All I Wanted
Was to stop being
That sad girl
With too much memory.
Life obliged
With repetitions
Of crying shames
In shapes of men.
Guess I should have listened
To mother's endless
Recitations: Can't squeeze
Water
From those rocks,
Or granite
From your sponge.
How did I go so wrong,
Confusing
Those wet things
With hard things;
Guess I'll never know
What's what--with
What. Ignore me.
I'm a savage with
Want's hard desires,
Willing them soft
Where will will
Invariably fail--
Some one heart's
Impossible delusions.
______________
A Simple Second Singer Relates
Boom. These work well in concert - and apart. Nice, nice. Yes to the Neruda connection - for me very real in Tell Me Another One... and Shock Wakes Up the Heart. Good work, Heather.
Thanks so much, Sam. :) I always appreciate your feedback. xo
"There you are in your imagination's ripped
Stockings. There I am, mending them by stitch."
All three are beautiful, but that image grabbed me.
I really like these, though I want to come back and reread them another couple of times.
'imagination's ripped/ stockings' is great, as is 'On the Necessary Absence of Cake'as a title.
Not sure about 'Dachau kitchen' but that may just be me.
The rhythm of 'No One Can' reminds me slightly of Eliot's 'Portrait of a Lady.'
Thanks so much, Kim. :)
Thanks, Roberta! Yes, I was torn on that word--but I think I used it because the poem's idea was inspired partially by a cookbook,non-fiction book that I read once that was all recipes written by people while in concentration camps. Still. True. Glad to get your pulse on that. I changed the word. I had not earned it. Good call! :) xo
There is so much to love here, so much to fathom. Neruda? Yes. Simple poems? I don't think so, because now I have to come back and read them again.
Fave.
Many, many thanks for your lovely comment, James. :) It made me smile today. xo
Wow, This smacks me hard. I'm left with so many colorful images of loneliness and solitude. There is something unifying in all these -- the mood? the power? the way they are about one thing, in the end? One carries me to the next. Did you order them this way specifically? I like the way the absence of cake comes in the middle -- it's a bit of comic relief, but then not really, and that too is so effective.
Lines that stand out for me:
"engender all self-
same ripples
on my blurring water,
Other women live always"
and
"In your tears, but they are not with me.
And they are not this now."
and
"Pass the irons.
Pass the water. Pass no sugar.
Pass, no exit."
and
"I'm a savage with
Want's hard desires,
Willing them soft"
and
ALL of Shock Wakes Up the Heart -- I can't take it apart, it works so beautifully, sadly, wonderfully well.
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yeu train women to love you and lose you. One punch to your solar plexus, wonderful
Cake one my favorite, but delete "with habit."
"Pass my time
as a mercy, then
like the fondest baker
in this prison's kitchen"
Very fine, Heather!
Amazing. I will definitely be reading these a few more times. Glad to have found them today!
Thanks so much, Michelle, Estelle, Bill, and Kari! :) I'm honored by your comments and appreciate that you took the time to stop in on my poems. Sincere thanks! H
nICE WORK. It shows beautifully your pain and your skill and your grace..No one can convince us we are pretty
when the object of our desires does not dote..and yet the poet makes of it what we know she will:ongoing creative courage, sacrificial sorrow and small triumph after small triumph.
this--
You train women this way,
to love you and lose you
this gracefully. --
but all three, really, beautifully stylistically, and achy, punch it out power, well integrated into formal lines of verse--
neruda, sure--
but mostly, fowler
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Thanks so much, Gary and Darryl. :) Nice of you two to pop in on this little group of poems. Xo!
P.S. Michelle, I want to say thanks once again for your thorough and lovely comment and to say the poems mainly fall organically in the order they were written, but I did put the most recent one, "All I Want" up higher into the thread b/c it seemed to belong there. Cheers all! Happy weekends to you!
P.P.S. Oops. As if that weren't some Freudian undergarment--I meant "All I WantED" above. :) Ah, well. And the beat goes on...
this is very lovely and strong, strong
Wow, these are wonderful, Heather. Like Sam said, they work individually and together, so well. Tell Me Another One...is my favorite.
Thanks so much, Meg and Kathy! :) xo!