In grief, I'd ride a slow train there with you,
one hand in yours and one hand on the rail,
then make love when you do not feel so blue.
I'd like to watch the trees fly by or through,
with skies so turquoise, clouds are more the pale:
In grief, I'd ride a slow train there with you
to stare near windows widened, glassy, too,
where teary eyes behold your napping fail,
then make love when you do not feel so blue:
Yes, there, where you know me and I know you,
our knowledge like the bolster of a sail;
I'd like to ride a slow train there with you,
or send a summer's fleet to comfort you,
a forest, sunbeam, stream, or ocean gale--
then make love when you do not feel so blue.
In lieu, I'd be the smile to heal us through--
the kiss, once blown, that surely we'd inhale;
I'd like to ride a slow train there with you,
and make love when you do not feel so blue.
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A poem originally entitled "Slow Train, Grief's Company Villanelle." Originally read on a Red River Writers BlogTalk radio show 2009. :)
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jeez, i just did a slow train poem last night, before i saw this, whaddaya kidding me?
it's lovely h--but you know i am sucker for a villanelle
sigh. just lovely. your repeated lines are just.so.perfect. healing, for this reader anyway. thank you.
Have always liked the presence of trains - the sound and motion. Great villanelle, Heather. Nice music in these lines.
love, in particular, how the language lulls, the form echoes content, a slow train.
beautiful.
Thanks so much, Gary, Linda, Sam, and Sara! :) *blush* So glad you guys liked it. I love villanelles, too. I write them often. There's a comfort in the repetition.
Blue. *