Lights,Camera -Action
by Gyanban
My studio lights are always glowing.
She spins, clicks, laughs and swirls her hair.
Her hands are smooth,feeling the metallic bulge.
I look at her mischevious eyes and they tell a story.
Click.
I grin.
Click.
She's got to be crazy,I manage to grin.
Click.
She starts to laugh hysterically.
Click.
Blood, spots the lens.
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Author's Note
A flash-fiction,with an open ended conclusion.I wrote this story visualizing a camera panning the characters a full 360 degrees.
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Nice vignette. I like how the ending invites us to come to our own conclusions.
Thanks Claire.
hm... Interesting how he says how she's crazy. I like it. I also liked it more after I read the author's note. Maybe try telling us about the camera panning around a full 360 degrees through the piece somehow? :)
Thank you Spencer.
The idea behind 360 degree view was to highlight a switch of intent, character and outcome. The girl could have shot herself, or shot the person behind the camera or vice-versa.
note the last comma after Blood - that is intentional - and gives rise a further set of questions.