Recycling Evidence
If you hide the empties
crudely out of sight
none will know
how much is downed
to counteract the down
with deeper down.
crudely out of sight
none will know
how much is downed
to counteract the down
with deeper down.
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"none will know" *
Been there but it's best to hide them with finesse. Good poem. Like how it falls down. *
Yup. Me, too. Been there, done that. Ouch! *
Yes. Fave.
Those last three lines, Gary. Yes, yes, and yes.
Thank you, Beate, and John, and Jake, and Emily, and Sam. I am grateful for your attention and commentary.
Ditto Sam. Really good.
Thank you, Bill.
Powerful little meditation. Been there. Done that. *
Thank you, Michael.
Yep.*