Love Note to/ Legal Pads
With lines, one
has at least
a bit of
scaffolding--
toe and hand-
holds against
the shear cliff
of silence.
has at least
a bit of
scaffolding--
toe and hand-
holds against
the shear cliff
of silence.
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Author's Note
Sometimes, the lines act as armature.
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Minimalist and likewise intense. I can see myself hanging on for dear life. :0)
sweet
Powerful closing. Nothing wasted. Good piece.
Simple and true.
Great word choices scaffolding, shear cliffs of silence. Yes, yes, yes. I prefer a spiral notebook myself for the same beautiful lines.
Marvelous! Have to have legal pads when the computer is down. *
Brilliant! *
I've gone totally digital, but I recall the sentiment. At least one can doodle on a legal pad.*
I love how you put thoughts on paper, Gary...skillful, to say the least. *
Thank you, Roberto, Henry (wink), Sam, Sally, Emily, Jake, Carlotte, Gary, and Foster for reading and your kind comments.