Inconvenient Weather
by Gary Hardaway
We should be grateful for the rain.
Especially, this small, slow rain
that doesn't swirl, terrifying,
through otherwise safe
and trim suburban streets.
With the sudden thrust
of April green, we can forget
our drought continues. When
cicadas cry in mid-July, we may
recall this cold, small rain
and long for its chilling
glaze of inconvenience.
I love the contrast of cicadas in mid-July and this chilling drizzle. FV*
Good use of imagery in small details. Nice work.
Nicely carved. Not easy to whittle a rainstorm.
"When / cicadas cry in mid-July"
Love line!
Well done. April is being good to you. *
Love the voice, the cadence. *