ABSALOM

He was still on the ground in the morning. His jaw hurt.

They were both gone; he was alone. He'd never been so proud of his son, though.

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A father and son story. This piece, 140 characters long, was published on Nanoism.net and can be seen here: http://nanoism.net/stories/483/

MichaelDickes, Jul 09, 2012

I nice little set-up with a lot of feely thingys between the lines.

MichaelDickes, Jul 09, 2012

I = A

John Riley, Jul 09, 2012

Nicely done.

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