A Dutiful Daughter
The first indication I had of what I look like came when a man put me back on the rack, remarking that I was too pink. Over the weeks that followed, I gained a few more ideas about my appearance from the comments of people in the shop. My photographic side had been taken at sunset, or maybe sunrise, and depicted some church. There was disagreement as to which one; I've never seen any of them, so it doesn't matter so much to me. To tell you the truth, I'm not sure what a church is supposed to look like at all.
When I was finally purchased by a young woman, I had grand hopes of being sent to her lover, of feeling words of passion etched across my back. As it turned out, she sent me to her mother.
Having a wonderful time in Venice.
Wish you were here,
Lynn
She didn't even mail me until she got to the airport. Not Marco Polo, the dingy Ryanair one.
I just hope her mother displays me somewhere interesting.
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written for 52|250 week 28: the postcard
edited 27 November to eliminate final sentence per the suggestion of Cherise Wolas (thanks!)
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I think this is a lot of fun, Elizabeth, especially when the postcard hopes she'll be written upon by the purchaser to her lover, but ends up with the mother.
I think I might suggest eliminating the last sentence, I don't think it's necessary and it detracts a bit.
Thanks for the comment. I think I will cut that last sentence; I'd thought it was a bit weak when putting the piece together but was worried that without it the ending seemed too sudden and the idea didn't come across.
Clever take on the them. Enjoyable.