line breaks
I
wish
someone
would
teach
me
how
to
break
a
line
how
to
crack
it
not
like a
twig
or
a
chicken
bone
how
to
crack
it
like
a
whip.
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the big mystery, to me
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The ending really pays off.
Not always easy to find the line break.
This is great. *****
For this one, it's line-break perfection. *
Really admirable, a poem that seems to be about nothing but itself and then steps out into another world.
Crack that whip!*
If you read my "I don't Understand Poets" you'll see that you just did what I can't figure out, which is make this work. I would say that Darryl Price knows sumat about line breaks, but of course this piece does not need one. Well written!
Thanks everybody for the interesting and supportive comments. I love being read by writers.
"like a whip" YES! *
Thank you Emily.