by Curtis Smith
Beneath the covers, the boy held a flashlight to his hand. The bones of his fingers a leafless tree, his flesh sunset red. He turned the flashlight to the book by his side. Gray's Anatomy, a volume rescued from the library's annual sale. Withdrawn stamped on its title page. The boy flipped past images of skulls and spinal columns before stopping at a picture of a hand. In the drawing, the skin had been removed, revealing a textured landscape of muscles and tendons. The boy opened his drawing pad and began to sketch.
In the woods, he shot groundhogs and rabbits and squirrels. He used his father's .22. His father had drowned last spring. When the boy held the rifle's sights on a living creature, his breath stilled and his heartbeat swimming in his ears, his father seemed close. The boy had grown into a patient hunter, and he believed his father would have been proud.
On a frigid January morning, the boy killed a hare, a clean shot through the head. The echo lingered amid the bare branches, and the boy's boots crunched over the brush. Time was of the essence. He rolled the hare onto its back and used his mother's five-inch hatpins to anchor the paws to the earth. His knife's honed blade hissed as it cut from crotch to jaw. The dusting of snow beneath the hare turned red. He made two more cuts, groin to hip, jaw to shoulder, and then peeled back the fur. Steam rose from the carcass, and the boy leaned close, knowing this mist was like no other. He took the sketchpad from his backpack. His pencil scratched the paper, his pace quickening as the steam faded.
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"The Hunter" appeared last year in The Los Angeles Review.
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What a strange little moment
but in a good way.
Neat piece.
Call it "The Artist" instead of "The Hunter."
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There's a lot going on here that you skillfully left unsaid. Nice.
The brilliance of this is what is left out and the "innocence" of the matter-of-fact language. Chilling.
I'm not really getting a loss of innocence from this story, but rather intellectual obsession. He makes a clean shot through the head and dissects the animals and painstakingly sketches the inner anatomy.
I think for me the strongest image is that of the mother's hatpins, being used to hold the animal in place as he dissects it. I love the unexpectedness of the image. It adds to much to the story so deftly. It's the details and how you render them that really make this story, Curtis. Great writing.
Excellent writing here, Curtis. The details in this are first rate.
Chilling in its clinical description. Especially that last line. Peace...
Thanks all for the kind words.