Savages

by Brett Garcia Rose

all of us,

thirsty savages, lost at sea.

Choking on sleeping pills,

that we may dream of water.

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Choke

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Gloria Garfunkel, Jan 16, 2013

Love the paradoxes embedded in the repetitions. Well done. Fave*

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Brett Garcia Rose, Jan 16, 2013

Thanks again, Gloria! Likely the shortest thing I've ever written :)

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Letitia Coyne, Jan 16, 2013

Truth.

Lxx

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Brian Michael Barbeito, Jan 16, 2013

yes. nice work.

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Brett Garcia Rose, Jan 16, 2013

Thanks Brian

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