by Bill Yarrow
The young boy writhes in the screaming water,
terrified by what's not there: the bottom sand.
He winds himself around your neck and climbs
up your head. You don't so much save him
as not drown yourself. You were a buoy. You
kept afloat until the tide pushed you into shore.
As you emerge from the water, he's still hanging
on to you, saying, “You saved my life! I owe you.”
You tell him that he doesn't owe you anything.
I didn't do anything, you say. It was the tide.
“The tide pushed us in.” He's not listening.
He doesn't care. He's got a hero and he's not
letting go. He follows you around for weeks.
At nine years old, you learn how cloying gratitude is.
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This poem appears in WRENCH (erbacce-press, 2009).
The poem appears in Pointed Sentences (BlazeVOX, 2012).
Nice. I love the turn of the water screaming in the first line and the idea of the person saving him by, like a buoy, just being there.
Waving?
I love the comparison - boy/buoy. I know they don't sound the same, but in my head, reading this, they do. The ending was a great surprise. I was expecting he was saved by an adult, but the narrator is only nine, too young to already feel the cloying nature of gratitude. And, for me, there is the wonderful addition: a nine year pretending a world view beyond his years.
Nice voice in the piece, Bill. Good work.
I felt the boy crawling, clinging, and the calm hero going with the flow. Nice.