Citizens: a fragment
by Ann Bogle
B: Write an essay about war for the checklist.
A: Did it, only it was a short story.
B: Write a poem with synecdoche.
A: I confuse it with metonymy.
B: Write a poem about the economy.
A: I did that, but it's a cut-up.
B: Write a short story about men for the gym teacher. Write a candle for the century.
A: How do I end it?
B: Write a synopsis.
A: I wrote a synopsis for the regional agent. They were unimpressed.
B: Write about sex. Write a negligee.
A: I wrote about sex. My friend wrote a negligee. Agents were unimpressed.
B: Write for your friends.
A: I lost my friends.
B: What if men are your friends?
A: Start over.
B: Forget the past.
A: Cry.
B: Die.
A: Sing.
B: A useful talent.
A: I need the past for writing purposes.
B: The moment is all.
A: For artists, not for writers.
B: Write a long joke.
A: Various items--puddles, frogs, fog, flag stripes.
B: Term litmus.
A: Self-leadership.
B: Encourage, enlighten, and entertain.
A: Be loyal, frank, and merry.
B: Marry for love.
A: Substitute Swiss for German.
B: Buy now.
A: Do nothing.
Does Anyone know the difference between synechdoche and metonymy? Is there a difference? Great piece. Down with prompts! Perfect line: "I need the past for writing purposes."
Well done, Ann. Nice flow.
"A: Various items--puddles, frogs, fog, flag stripes."
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Fave, Ann. I liked "A" more than "B", but I'm thinking this could be a self-containerd Q&A within oneself.
"Write a candle for the century." Sense out of no-sense. Great piece.*
Really enjoyed this fun little piece.
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I love the way this starts off so logical and formal and then starts falling into emotions about crying and dying and then pulls itself together again with Swiss vs German and buying now vs doing nothing. Thoroughly enjoyable. Fave *
David Ackley, thanks for your astute comment.
Sam, thanks.
David James, I like your idea.
John and Matt, thanks, and thanks, Gloria!