The candle was near the windowsill.
It smelled like
the musk my father used to spray
before he went away
to work.
Oh father, I remember you,
your chocolate brown eyes,
would watch the sunrise
before breakfast;
serious- so serious
and waiting for something
that did not come.
I looked out the window towards the amber leaves,
dried and curled on the side like ripped silk
ready for a Winter fade;
when the limbs would be naked again,
yet the branches poured from the trunk like
tributaries flowing into a larger lake and there was no wind,
or bird in sight,
to lay on the weary limb.
The candle flickered for them.
Touching poem. Right for the season.
Thank you Erika!
Beautiful, resonant. Not one wasted word.
"Oh father," Perfect early turn. Hard to do. Full turn at the end. Nice.
Love "a Winter fade,..." Brand new to me.
"Waiting for something that did not come" is the the real deal.
Thank you Dianne!
Enjoyed.
Thanks Gary!
Excellent work, Agnes.*
Thank you Tim!
Memory speaks, and the senses are summoned.
Good work.
Thanks Strannikov!