Woulda been considerate of you to slip in an extra adverb or two for us to find and hold up with an excited AHA!!
I'll be damned, tho. I studied this with a jaundiced eye and found nothing to pick at. Decidedly disappointing, you ask me.
Sometimes i write well just to piss everyone off.
A place to offer honest critiques on other member's posted work. No need to ass kiss here. Just make sure you critique at least two pieces a week. Unless I am the only member, then one critique is plenty.
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