My story "Distant Thunder" appears at www.everydayfiction.com
On this site readers are asked to rate stories. I am hoping that some time between December 26th and December 31st you read my story, and if you like it, give it a five star rating. You do not have to log in or comment, although if you wish to comment, you may.
Good one, Andrew, keep 'em coming.
Good story, Andrew. I rated on the site.
I published here recently and was very flattered and grateful but very turned off by their comment and rating system. The comments seemed so random. I would never submit again.
...but what did you think of his story?
I loved the story. I think the site is demeaning, just the way I felt about my story. He deserves better.
Andrew, great story. I left a comment and rated it but I'm not sure it was accepted. The site was acting hinky.
Good story, Andrew. I didn't expect the dad to actually sleep with her, even after he said he'd like to paint her. Why not? It seems inevitable now, and I don't know, except that the son did not expect it. And in the end, I was left wondering if the son had been just a means to reach the famous father.