Forum / DESIRE is up at Metazen

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    Susan Tepper
    Nov 30, 04:51pm

    My new story "Desire" and deep thanks to Frank Hinton et al for their support!
    http://www.metazen.ca/?p=8602

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    Bill Yarrow
    Nov 30, 06:25pm

    Very good story, Susan. Congratulations!

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    Christopher Allen
    Nov 30, 11:23pm

    As you well know, I loved it!

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    Jules Archer
    Dec 01, 01:41am

    Love this, Susan. Great female character; I could read more about her. The last line is awesome.

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    Sam Rasnake
    Dec 01, 02:54am

    Good character piece, Susan.

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    Matthew A. Hamilton
    Dec 01, 12:19pm

    Good job Susan.

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    Susan Tepper
    Dec 01, 04:32pm

    Thanks everyone who liked Desire. Your comments made me very happy! It's part of a series I'm working on with these characters.
    Other installments have been published recently at Pure Slush, Thunderclap #7, kaffe in katmandu and A-minor. More are forthcoming this month in The Linnet's Wings and Schuylkill Valley Journal.

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    Matt Potter
    Dec 02, 07:17am

    Yes, we love this woman who orders peaches, wears white to the beach and wants a watch!

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    Susan Tepper
    Dec 02, 12:03pm

    Matt Potter, thank you for loving her! She is on her quest, like we all are...

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    Bobbi Lurie
    Dec 02, 04:24pm

    Very daring in parts. It reflects real life. Lots of space for the reader to participate and imagine. I love how it is open-ended.

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    Kathy Fish
    Dec 02, 11:08pm

    Strong story and perfect last line, Susan. Way to go!

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