It couldn't be a worse time for failed novelist Robert Grayson. He's 40 and falling apart. He's balding and accumulating a gut. His job writing technical manuals for software looks like it might get cut. Then his wife does the unthinkable and files for divorce.
On that very day, he literally runs into himself, which is, of course, impossible. Certain that he's lost his mind, he does the only sensible thing—run away. Except the other him, Bob, is in way better shape and catches him easily.
Robert begins to warm to the idea when Bob runs into Ann, Robert's soon-to-be ex-wife and two of her closest friends. Bob happens to be with Mia, the lasciviously luscious Bombshell. To Ann—who on that fateful day was actually having second thoughts—and her friends, it seems as though Robert is taking the news of their impending divorce way better than Ann herself is. He's suddenly trimmer, better dressed, and has a way better haircut. And he and the Bombshell look like they know each other pretty well.
This, Robert thinks, might get interesting.
In fact, it gets way more interesting—and way weirder—than Robert could possibly anticipate. Especially when they switch places. Especially when Robert's Narrative Consultant, Charlie Burns, LCSW, finds out that Bob may not be just a literary invention that enables Robert to objectify himself. Burns, who may be the only person on earth who lovingly remembers Robert's first novel, The _____, sees the opportunity to make history as a narrative therapist by doing the unthinkable and inserting himself into Robert's narrative.
Maybe it is an adhesion in the multiverse, as Robert's best friend Leo says. Whatever it is, Robert has to deal not just with Bob, but two Anns, two of his son, Robbie, and two Mias. Things are fun when he and Bob trade places, but things get very scary when he and Bob decide to introduce the two Robbies to each other and they, unbeknownst to their fathers, trade places.
By turns a metafictional farce and a coming-of-middle-age story, The Bob Delusion is a novel about the stories we tell ourselves that make us who we are. And it answers the fundamental question that humans have grappled with for the ages: If I'd done things different, would I be different? The answer: Not so much.
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This is the pitch for my novel, THE BOB DELUSION, which I'm clumsily posting if anyone wants to read it. Who knows, maybe it will be the first novel published in its entirety on Fictionaut.
In any case, I'd love comments, feedback, criticisms, etc.
List of chapters posted at the end.
The idea of a coming-of-middle-age novel actually made me laugh out loud.
you've captured my interest. sounds not only fun to read but also intriguing re: the literary aspects
stephen,
this is loopy cool. reminds me of woody allen's nyer stuff, and purple rose, and the footnotes put it into dfw country. which means nothing--you have boatloads of talent, and this is all you, a complete original. run with it. all best,
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Definitely sounds interesting and funny...something I'd buy once it hits the stands (even if I didn't know ya)
Instant fave, Stephen. Wow. This is the first thing I've read of yours, and I'm already a fan. Consider me your groupie.
The way you construct sentences is just perfect for the story. And this piece highlights the universal in one guy: "If I'd done things different, would I be different?" I'm personally relieved that the answer is "Not so much."