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Rain pours through the ceiling and the building's fire alarm sounds repeated bursts of loud abrasive distortion 1 2 3.
In the pulse of red strobe lights, a large fireman who had moments before been sound asleep stands in the middle of the room. He holds a waterlogged ceiling panel. In the center of the panel is the alarm. Two bright blue wires run from the box and disappear overhead.
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He has been looking at the configuration for some time. Around him, six other firemen have arranged themselves in postures that reference the gallery in a painting of a public dissection. The allusion is complicated by heavy raincoats, enormous boots and fire helmets, red strobe lights and recurrent alarm sounds.
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The large sleepy fireman says: We do not touch alarms. Does anyone know the code?
Here follows silence.
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What are we going to do now?
We could spend the night ignoring this alarm.
But what if the building catches fire?
Here follows another silence.
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We'd be liable.
Some look at the rain pouring through the ceiling.
Others at the growing puddles on the floor.
You shouldn't have said that out loud.
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in which one quandry leads to another.
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I chuckled at the ending. Is that okay? I can picture this. Like it.
james: of course it is.
i watched most of this happen last night while sitting in a publick house. i thought it hilarious. then i began to grow concerned that i kinda liked the fire alarm sound. then the nice firemen threw me and my friend out of the establishment, presumably because they didnt want witnesses.
Enjoyed this, Stephen. Really like this form. Yes.
I've actually been in this situation. I like the smooth back and forth between narration and dialogue.