The sky is arranged like a panel. Across its center runs a stripe of ochre. From it radiates repeating bands of gray.
Various sections of the in-between are networks of cracks. Perhaps there is a glaze.
In the background to the right the ghost of a stick figure fisherman shudders through the loop in which it is trapped: the light that flickers through the seams of the smelt house gives away its passage.
Nearby a figure wearing a long coat has just walked into the water. Pockets filled with shot she walked into the water. The rings she left behind are vanishing into the slackness.
Overnight a colony of enormous sea urchins arrived on top of the marsh. They waver in the air amidst regions of rust and mud.
Periodic clusters of white wind-up birds wobble through trajectories of falling.
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i had the idea of trying to make this read like an exercise in linear perspective, so a geometry construction centered on a single viewpoint.
it turned out to be more complex to pull off than i thought.
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Reminds me of Robbe-Grillet. (That's a compliment.) Like this very much, Stephen.
a comparison with robbe-grillet is high praise indeed. thanks very much, bill, for the read, comment and fave.