A daydreams about a woman whose name he's forgotten next to B, who's been drunk since afternoon.
C, green-gray tinged and socially invisible, rummages through his pockets for a cigarette.
D looks into his beer while E talks about playing the horses and overhears F complaining about taxes and gun control to G who is not listening.
H looks over the summer menu.
I traces with an index finger the line between inside and outside that runs along the horizon that is visible through the window.
J dispenses advice about boat engines to K who is just passing through town.
L runs a rack full of glasses to the kitchen where M is holding a handful of clams.
N bursts through the other door and back into the bar as O pours Coke into a pint glass of rum beneath the image of P and his Action Team that is elsewhere.
Q looks at a cribbage board with melancholy intensity as R counts 15-2 15-4. S treats their game as a spectator sport. T is talking about wanting to have kids.
U diagrams an Amway plan on a napkin for V who takes it for a map of something else.
W is noticing that the music pours from a little speaker directly over his head.
X struggles silently to remain optimistic: Y surveys the scene to find fault.
Z alone watches the golf reruns on the monitor that dominates the space.
Every bar is an alphabet of loneliness.
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No. 26 from the 100 Days Project.
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Well done, Stephen. I like this form. Good ending. Good piece.
I really like that closing line. Wraps it up neatly.
thanks for the reads, comments and faves. i'm pleased you enjoyed the piece. it's also a tour around the bar in a publick house near where i live...